Hi there! Would you be able to provide some feedback on my proposal that was eliminated? I liked the challenge and probably would want to try again.

Thanks!

Oh Hi!

Yes.
Well. I believe you submitted a logo that resembled and "M" that seemed like a bicycle profile of sorts.
It was clever, certainly. I'm looking more for a sylized, simple, representation of the shape I drew in the sand with my feet. It needs to convey the elements of circles with a central supportive element. It needs to convey movement that's created by the human form in uprightness. It can't be exactly symetrical, as movement, altho folks may strive toward it, rarely acheives symetry; instead human spirit expressed through movement and function of the human sketeton/nervous system is more about relationship, counterbalance, flow, ease, extension....lightness but grounded and supported by and from the earth's force transmitted upwards........

I'm thinking of something that shows perspective, implies a journey from here to there, relates to the earth and inspires the truth that all who own one can discover delight in their daily living when their movement intelligence is in the driver's seat.

How bout that?
Does that help?

Thank you for your interest.

Kalyani

PS: I did like your interpretation by the way. Clever.

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Oh Hi!

Yes.
Well. I believe you submitted a logo that resembled and "M" that seemed like a bicycle profile of sorts.
It was clever, certainly. I'm looking more for a sylized, simple, representation of the shape I drew in the sand with my feet. It needs to convey the elements of circles with a central supportive element. It needs to convey movement that's created by the human form in uprightness. It can't be exactly symetrical, as movement, altho folks may strive toward it, rarely acheives symetry; instead human spirit expressed through movement and function of the human sketeton/nervous system is more about relationship, counterbalance, flow, ease, extension....lightness but grounded and supported by and from the earth's force transmitted upwards........

I'm thinking of something that shows perspective, implies a journey from here to there, relates to the earth and inspires the truth that all who own one can discover delight in their body's daily living when their movement intelligence is in the driver's seat.

How bout that?
Does that help?

Thank you for your interest.

Kalyani

PS: I did like your interpretation by the way. Clever.

Wow! That definitely helps. Thank you!