hi, could you please let me know if I am on the right track and if you would like to see any changes? thanks!

Keith, Thanks for your submission.  I feel like its a good start.  A simpler color palate might improve the design, I think we like greys/reds/blacks.  Also, making the company name a little bit more bold might help as well.  Thanks again!

hello again. Please let me know if the new upload is more what your looking for