I changed the logo related text from "to be rather than to seem" to "Working hard,smart, and together for better health"

hi , can you leave me a feedback . ? i just got the rating but no feedback about it .
just want to know if i on the right track

br ,
doodlemoodle

thank you for your best feedback..
Do you need any changes in any design? please provide me some instruction for better designs...
thank you...
best regards,
Mr.Johnny